zondag 14 augustus 2011

Reposted And Edited Question Of The Day Blog: Kelleth


I wanted to repost this for a while now, But most of the times I was either to lazy or just wanted to blog about something else. It was part of the original ''Question of the day'' feature which is now long gone. And due to bugs I am unable to edit the original. I'm still happy with the story overall which is basically the same as the beginnings of the 3 official handheld and 2 PS2/PS3 Rune Factory: A Fantasy Harvest Moon games. For all your questions and info hunger go to this site: Ushi No Tane  But either way I tried to make it a story within its own right whilst still tying it in with the original game. Which IMHO still has the best storyline of the trilogy. The grammar needed some desperate attention and I thought I'd add a little bit more padding :P 

Any Way Here's The Edited Repost

Yep this guy I don`t even have a rpg profile up for him at all and I'm not planning to make one at all, Well... except for this though lol.

The Story
 Kelleth
Kelleth
Kelleth is a young man (16 to be exact) of great wealth who grew up in a big city located in the Sechs country of the Rune Factory franchise. All was well with his live and he was honoured on getting trained by the greatest master in order to join the Sechs Country's new experimental legion powered by both the skills of battle and the power of their technology, the Rune magic, and the power of a fraction of the Grimoire's essence for super human power. But after the battle with Raguna and the rest of Norad it all went array. The new emperor who inherited Ethelberd's throne held a grudge against Kelleth's father for a long time and he decides that this is his chance to cut those lose ends. He lets his troops attack Kelleth's home and raid the whole mansion clean. But Kelleth's family where long gone by the time the order was sent. And as they proceed to escape to the Norad country in a aircraft Kelleth suddenly falls ill and the tattoo giving to him that holds the essence of the Grimoire starts to leak and cover his body. That is until he suddenly disappears leaving only a few shreds of black light flying away in the wind. His parents believing that the essence killed Kelleth flew on to safety still crying about their lost child.

 Orc
Orc
A few months later in the North east of the Norad country Kelleth appears to walk out of a dimensional portal apparently unscathed and he seems to remember everything that has happened. But he still doesn't know how the hell he got there and where his parents are. So as he walks around in search of food he comes by an old torn down farm.. He checks out the shed only to find a couple of old worn out tools and a few seeds. He then tries to enter the farm house to get help, but all he finds is a beat up old bed in a musty atmosphere. Sad about the fact that he still can't find anything to eat, he lets himself fall down on the bed and fall fast asleep. A few hours pass and Kelleth is woken up by a loud crash and a quick slap to the face by an angry girl who proceeds to kick him out of the house. she says that she doesn't want any hobo's on her Great Uncle's land. And as he tries to run away he quickly realises that the farm is surrounded by several berserker orcs, who instantly begin their attack. Alerted by this he rushes back to the shed grabbing the girl by the arm and throwing her inside the shed to protect her. He tries to fend them of with a fire spell but it didn't work as his powers seem to have been lowered significantly for some reason. He looks at his tattoos which now seem to have a scar tissue colour to them instead of the jet black he used to have. The girl screams: what the hell are you trying to do? as she throws an old hoe to him which hits him in the head. After a few rubbing on his head he uses it to fend of the monsters. 

 
 Desseliah
Desseliah
After finally winning the harsh first battle the girl comes forth from the farm house. She say that she is an half-elf named Deselliah and since Kelleth saved her he can now stay on her Great Uncle's land for at least awhile. She proceeds to say that he can also use the seeds and farm tools to make a living for himself so he has something eat. She gives it an hour to explain how the dungeons work and to instruct him how to farm. She finally leaves after saying how much she hopes he will meet the people in the town. Deciding that he could not do much to find his parents in the middle of nowhere and on an empty stomach. He decides it be best to give it a chance for now. And the first thing he does is to catch up her to the town hoping to meet the town folk and have a bite to eat. And so enters the usual Rune Factory: A Harvest moon Fantasy story line of farming, mining, fishing, killing and breeding monsters and all of that, whilst still trying to get that one girl.

Notes:
  • Raguna is the hero of the first game
  • All the characters and places besides of Kelleth and Desseliah are owned by Natsume
  • The Grimoire is a dragon and the most powerful monster of that world its pretty much godlike.
  • The north east region that I described ain't official it doesn't exist in any of the games owned by Natsume.
  • Monsters don't get killed they just get send back to the First Forest a magical place that is considered to be the origin of all life.
I'm happy with the changes and the grammar is a bit better now. :)  - Kelleth
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Editor's Note: And that's one more for the Fan-fic tag ^^

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